caboose-the-pantless's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ROFL sword]

not bad

So your drawing skills are like [|||||__] there. Right? Not Great, but not bad for someone who's just starting. But your animation is like [|____] there. There was a huge lack of it. Animation is why people use flash instead of FireWorks and Photoshop. Honestly, I know it sucks a lot, but if you want to get better, I just repeatedly go in, and just draw and draw and draw, but not still images, I would start with key frames, the main poses and movement of the actions, and just go back, and fill in all the frames that should go in the middle. And just keep filling in till it looks more fluid. Then do it again. And again. And again. If you want to get good at almost anything, practice is key. Mind Numbing Repetitive Practice. That, and I would try to clean up your artwork a little in the process :X

Kilgorn responds:

Thanks for the advice Im just gonna have to practice like crazy and hope I can my frame construction better

[Stamper N' Johnny]

Dude, I so know that feeling

And then you have a nice flat top with the little space on the side, feelin all proud of yourself, and your like "Dude, if I just got a straight one if would be a fucking PERFECT CLEAR" and then they saend you one of those z pieces and its like
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
because it puts a fucking whole .. RIGHT THERE... and you were SO CLOSE (._. ;)

SardonicSamurai responds:

I NO WUT UR TAWKIN BOUT WILLIS.

[Insert Coin]

Meh

Well... it doesn't look like the story was too well thought out; It wasn't solid and it didn't quite pull off random humor that well. I think the key factor that throws the second off is the animation. Not going to sugar coat it, it blows. My tip is just keep practicing; Good animation can make something like that a hell of a lot more funny. Especially considering the explosion graphic you had in it is ancient and overused.

ps - the witty replies to the other comments make the caboose laugh

Little-Rena responds:

I think you have pretty much covered what was already said only in a much longer manner, as well as pointing out the explosion animation which yes is overused. The reason the story isn't so good is because this was a part for a collab that was never finished.

ps - I got too lazy to make my responce longer.